We all got some feedback individually from tutorials today which helped develop our ideas a bit more. After speaking with Geoff Kim, Dave and I thought more about editing our manifesto so it is more concise or really emphasising how long and unwieldy it is.
And, from their tutorial with Jim, Ali and Anna thought about looking at it on different levels - possibly three books. The original text, our creatures interpretation and then a scientific study of our creatures/ amoebas. So the last book would be really taking a step back and getting out of the amoeba world. It reminded us of this episode of the Simpsons. (see the video at 7mins 30 seconds)